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Bedroom Eyes Lyra

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'Cause why not?

Tried doing the show style (sorta) once more.

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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

For starters, I like the way Lyra seductively stares at the viewer. The way that her eyes are drawn half open perfectly hint what’s going to come. I also appreciate how her lids are a darker shade of green, which gives the unicorn a more beautiful appeal. In addition, I admire the lighting. You knew exactly where to insert each shadow, from her forehead to her neck to even the front of her back hoof. As for criticisms, I would like it if it showed her whole body, instead of cutting off the bottom of her legs. On top of that, I think that the background should be given a different color. Hues like dark red or royal purple would work because they’re more seductive colors. I understand that Lyra’s body is mostly green, but it’s not the type of color I think of when I’m in an amorous state. But other than that, I still think this piece holds up. Not only is it well outlined, but it also knows how to be romantic. Overall, it’s pretty good. Keep up the great work, Sintakhra!