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Bootcamp Day 1: Favourite Canon Pony by Sintakhra Bootcamp Day 1: Favourite Canon Pony by Sintakhra
Feeny the Meanie tempted me into joining in #Lilys-Bootcamp. So here is my Day One entry, Squeakie Belle!

Bootcamp is about getting better, so any critiques, comments, criticisms, comments etc are all really welcome, more than ever on this series of images.
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I would have like to have known in what context Sweetie Belle looks like she is fearing or surprised at. It also seems she is a little too grey and faded. Is that your signature under her? I thought it was grass or might be grass. I can't tell. The shadow under her is a nice touch and she seems to be in proper proportions. It's always a treat to see a MLP drawing with the lines like that of the show and this doesn't disappoint me. In short, it would be interesting to see what context she's in but otherwise a fine piece.
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The shadow underneath of Sweetie Belle seems a bit disconnected from her. There are points, more specifically at the back legs that don't match up with the lighting source implied or the pose. Gaps in where the shadow should be on the leg furthest from the viewer and the shadow extending past where her leg is in the back leg closest to the viewer. I also notice that the irises of her eyes are two different widths, which might be a bit more nit-picky from my standpoint. I agree with the other critique that Sweetie's coloring seems a bit dark. If you got the colors from a screen cap, then I'll just leave it at that. It could just be the color of background interfering with how the color is seen.

Overall I think this is a fantastic picture, and great vector work.
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Sweetie Belle is my favourite canon pony too. :heart:
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Sintakhra Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good man!
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AuroraChiaro Jun 1, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I love Sweetie Belle :)
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Sintakhra Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So do I!
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TomA62975 Jun 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hahah, another person actually doing the bootcamp. Brilliant, most people didn't finish and I thought I was going to be the only one... Have fun with it.
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Sintakhra Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll try my best to do every challenge :)
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ZeroPegasi Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Vectoring....a skill I have YET to learn....still trying to get my inking to look nice
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Sintakhra Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Vectoring is fairly easy, it just takes time and patience. Actual Drawing and Inking is far harder and a Skill I wish i had.
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ZeroPegasi Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I found inking tricky, not a steady hand
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lordzid Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I REALLY LOVE HER MANE!!!!

AGAIN GREAT JOB :D
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