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Okay, first of all, the whole idea is just brilliant and hilarious. The fact that the crusaders messed up just by slightly miswording their problem shows how much simple things can turn into huge misunderstandings, and the reaction each character has to Fluttershy's "explanation" just highlights the whole fiasco.
In addition, I think the art was really well done, and each character's reactions were perfectly done. It all serves to highlight the story and show how much good intentions can go wrong.
Overall, this is an excellent piece of work, and I would love to see more comics from you.
The Technique almost perfect however, i draw half a star, because i am not satisfied with Fluttershy's expression on the third panel, i would imagine her to have a more awkward look and be a lot more repulsed by a the task this embarrassing. The face of the CMC is also all the same expression wich is quite fun, but i would imagine them to have around the same reaction mentally but different expressions (but that is all really just nitpicking, it really does not matter that much, in other words no removal of stars because of great vectorization.)
The impact is an average since this has indeed been done before however you have the ability to make great comics and i look forward too seeing more of it.
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