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Too Much Information by Sintakhra Too Much Information by Sintakhra
When the Cutie Mark Crusaders go on a quest to find some ingredients for their next culinary masterpiece, they seek out the wise mare on the edge of ponyville for information.

Information they'll not soon be forgetting.

Sorry for the day-late comic. Procrastination got the better of me!

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:iconbraverythehusky:
Very well done! Not to mention funny! The artwork looks almost like it from the show, and the joke is something I think anypony could laugh at. I'm don't think I can even find a single thing wrong with it. I personally like stuff like this because it gives a change of pace from the cute element to the somewhat more adult comedy of the fandom. You have even managed to do that without going all full blown adult on it. All can really say is keep practicing at this art style to make it look even more amazing than it is now! Great work and I look forward to seeing more from you.
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Because it's really well done, the suggestions I have are probably pretty minor. I think the joke's been done, but it's a funny one so it works regardless :D

As for style issues, in the first panel, it would help with understanding what's going on and to show more force if you had some lines coming from the direction of the three girls towards the word FLUTTERSHY (I hope you know what I mean because it's hard to describe, but it's a common comic device).

In the panel with her saying "Okay", I think her mouth should be open and the girls should be looking directly at her. Just my opinion, but I think this panel would be stronger if you did.

For the last part, I believe it would have been a little funnier if at least one of the girl's mouths were hanging open. Also I notice that Fluttershy's wing is hanging low in the last panel? Was that intentional? Finally, it might have more impact if flutter had her ears down and eyes to the back as if looking away in embarrassment. That's purely stylistic though so go with what you think works best.

Lastly, I don't really understand the star rating very well so if it seems off, just ignore it and go by what I said instead.
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MetalBrony823 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016
Pardon me, if you don't do requests, I understand, but I was wondering if you have a comic about Fluttershy and Spike together? If you don't then Can I please request that? If you don't do requests, I understand, but I would want it to be Fluttershy noticing Spike crying and asking him what's wrong, and maybe Spike was crying because he worries that Fluttershy doesn't like him anymore, and Fluttershy comforts him, saying she does still love him.
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:iconrainbowdash2007645:
rainbowdash2007645 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  New Deviant
Fluttershy (leaf) plz  um i told them the bee and bird thing.
Pinkie Pie Scream01  not the bird and bee thing
Fluttershy (derping) PLZ  pinkie pinkie are you ok
Pinkie pie (wow) plz  i'm fine right girls
FREE Cutie Mark Crusaders animated icon right pinkie
meanwhile in cantorlot high
Fluttershy EqG (walking with animal friends) plz  what a beautiful day
EqG Rainbow Dash Plz 2 fluttershy you know theres a meeting of me smashing my guitar
Fluttershy EqG (thanks) plz  yes but i just like animals
EqG Rainbow Dash PLZ  well i'm starting
Rainbow Dash EqG (slamming guitar) plz awesome guitar smash 
 
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:iconbleedman123456:
bleedman123456 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016
Ah, nothing like the smell of freshly scarred for life fillies in the morning.
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:iconrobotponytron:
Robotponytron Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  New Deviant Student
Did Eu tell how the birds stroke the long dicks of the bee and stuck them up their big butts
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:iconkwitterpwea:
KwitterPwea Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did you tell them about mating.







HMMMM
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:icontoonsgirl:
ToonsGirl Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Student General Artist
Can I make a comic dub of this strip?
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:iconsintakhra:
Sintakhra Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure :) Just throw in a link to the comic in the description. - and I wouldn't mind seeing the dub once it's uploaded ^^
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:iconponypal155:
ponypal155 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2015  Professional Filmographer
i get it XD
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:iconrandomguy211:
Randomguy211 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Student Photographer
LOL!!
oh this is just to funny!
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:iconmaleficheart:
MaleficHeart Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
What did Fluttershy told to the crusaders?
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:iconcooldude154:
cooldude154 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
How the cursaders were made
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:iconmaleficheart:
MaleficHeart Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
Realy? I tough that Fluttershy told them about how are animals mating. XDD
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:iconcooldude154:
cooldude154 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
I mean it just a hunch
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:iconmaleficheart:
MaleficHeart Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015
Ah, but what you think then?
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:iconcooldude154:
cooldude154 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015
I guess how fillies are made
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:iconmaleficheart:
MaleficHeart Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015
Hmmm, pegasus fillies or unicorn fillies are fantasy, so they aren't mating, i think that they do another thing to make children.
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:iconcooldude154:
cooldude154 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015
Like what
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:iconcheesycheeseocheese:
CheesycheeseoCheese Featured By Owner May 13, 2015  Student
Did scootaloo get a wing boner from that
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:iconkittyk21:
KittyK21 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Writer
I linked my friend to this. I don't know her reaction but I thought this was funny
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:iconwardianadigress:
WarDianaDigress Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Artist
wow * slowly walks away* hehe i'll go over to twilight for a little see ya*dashed to twilights tree house
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:iconkittyk21:
KittyK21 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Writer
Now I know her reaction... it really wasn't that funny. *Runs to Canterlot*
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:iconwardianadigress:
WarDianaDigress Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Artist
XD
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:iconkittyk21:
KittyK21 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Writer
how did I run to Canterlot?
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:iconwardianadigress:
WarDianaDigress Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Artist
super speed or you are just fast 
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:iconkittyk21:
KittyK21 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Writer
I still don't think it's posssible
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:iconrollingthunder75:
rollingthunder75 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Dude, nifty
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:iconequitariuum:
Equitariuum Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015
Well... considering that in her place Twiligh (and I like her) would match directly with a lesson in physiology and functional anatomy topographic... I would say that for the young fillies could go much worse! XD
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:iconmh3umaster:
mh3umaster Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
rong birds and bees
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:iconmime432:
mime432 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015
I think Fluttershy broke them
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:iconmalphlink:
MalphLink Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
We will need an engineer for fix them
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:iconthatjackguy:
thatjackguy Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015
theyre not girls anymore pinkie pie, theyre adults...lol
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:iconrnko26:
rnko26 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
aaaaaaaaaaand scarred for life!
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:iconsasq:
SasQ Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Dat wingboner thou ;)
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:iconfacelesssoles:
FacelessSoles Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't get it :( I'm dumb...

You know that moments when you read the comments and everyone is laughing but you not?
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:iconthe-last-of-the-oni:
THE-LAST-OF-THE-ONI Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Professional Writer
She thought they were asking her about the birds and the bees, baby making, when they were really asking were they could find some birdseed, and honey to use in their cupcakes.
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:iconcaldorosa:
CaldoRosa Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
lol
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:iconfujin777:
Fujin777 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Fluttershy, you're in a whole heap of trouble.
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:iconponylover115:
ponylover115 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Student Artist
i did the same ting opsie with my friends littel sistersnosebleed Mlp Lick 
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:iconmokamcdowell:
MokaMcdowell Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
Oh my god that was cute, i could see that actually happening
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:iconragameechu:
Ragameechu Featured By Owner Edited Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconsweetiebelleshyplz::iconsaysplz::iconscarredforlifeplz:
:iconapplebloomsadplz::iconsaysplz::icondeaughfishplz:
:iconscaredscootalooplz::iconsaysplz::icondisturbedfishplz:

Heh heh, nice comic. :XD: Though they could have clarified whaat they were looking for better. :XD:. Heh, heh, kids. :lol:
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:iconjninelives:
JNinelives Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
At least they found out from Fluttershy, I think she would have explained things calmly and maturely.

I can just imagine RD or Twilight trying to answer the same question... xD.

And thank Celestia they didn't go looking on the interweb (shudders).
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:iconrubyg242:
RubyG242 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
or if they found out from applejack she would've been like   Request-free pony Applejack icon Saysplz emoticon edditionfuck your childhood
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:iconjninelives:
JNinelives Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pretty sure AJ has more common sense to be that blunt though :).
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:iconmissael111796:
missael111796 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Personally, I blame how they phrased their request.
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DJDOCTOR1 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well the Cutie Mark Crusaders had to learn sometime but never thought that it would be by fluttershy and those faces after being told.
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:iconskyalar:
SKYALAR Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Shit...
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:icondavis78:
davis78 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
and thats how their minds just blow off. 
please make a sequel abouth how applejack, dash and rarity react afther seeing their little sisters out of his own mind :D XD
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:iconmlploveryay123:
mlploveryay123 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
uuuum...rainbow dash and scootaloo aren't sisters
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:iconfanfics4ever:
fanfics4ever Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
by genetics they aren't.
by honorary status, they kind of are.
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