Oh my gosh! This is the 10th comic in the series already? It's hard to believe I've been putting these things out since just before March, and I hope to keep them coming for as long as you want them!
For our 10th comic celebration, we put Twilight the Technological Bane of Ponyville against the Scourge of the Universe, the Daleks.
Both defeated in battle more times than the Empire, who will triumph in this technological battle, this Equinous Escapade, this Catastrophic.... cobblestone block!
Ponies belong to our supreme pony overlords Comic and Vectors done by myself Please do not re-use without permission or i'll send Squeakie Belle after your entrails.
I like the vectors, look just like the show. I looks like it took some work, and it's really cute. Although you should add speech bubbles, and the magic from the horn looks like it has too much line, it needs to curve up a bit more. You could do a bit better on the machine, but it's pretty good, I suck at drawing/vectoring machines. In fact, I suck at vectoring. xD Anyways, the comic is good, and make sense. But in the last panel, you should put the machine's words above it, not on the side of it. It's a bit hard to read,and the body movements aren't that.. accurate they need more movement. Other than that, you did a really great job!
Hmmm, nice work to say the least ^^. I like it when other pony's work on famous comic pieces like these, and I love it more when they do a great job. The Dalek seems accurate in detail, and I found alot of humor to go along with the comic itself of course ^^. Detail seems accurate, as well as char drawings themselves. If I was to be picky, only complaint would be her Cutie Mark star keeps changing size through it. Also, might've wanted to add another picture showing her flipping it first, there's no movement affect shown otherwise. Otherwise, perfect ^^!
Anyways, the comic is good, and make sense. But in the last panel, you should put the machine's words above it, not on the side of it. It's a bit hard to read,and the body movements aren't that.. accurate they need more movement. Other than that, you did a really great job!
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